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A poem - Short and Sweet

Figment
by: Myself

Like a phantom you walk the corridors of my heart and mind
Your kisses steal my breath
Your touch brings a trembling
My heart longs for your presence
My ears long for the brush of your lips whispering your love
My skin longs for the caress of your hands
As a flower longs for the summer rain to wash over it
Yet when I open my eyes, you are no longer there
And I wonder if you are real, or a figment of my imagination

Comments

Jean-Luc Picard said…
Wondefully written; it's said with such feeling and intensity.
1/09/2006 02:54:00 PM
Ciera said…
What can I say, Jean-Luc...I have a friend who brings it out in me...
1/09/2006 03:04:00 PM
Daydream believer said…
*blush*

....very good....

jean-luc, you stumbled on your words. *giggle*
1/09/2006 08:01:00 PM
Jean-Luc Picard said…
We both know who that is!
1/10/2006 02:06:00 PM
Ciera said…
feigns innocence


I'll be stumbling with my words next, Daydreamer!
1/10/2006 02:11:00 PM
Ciera said…
Thanks MC.



Did any one else notice how Jean-Luc just kinda blew by Daydreamer's comment?! I wonder if it rendered him speechless!!!
1/10/2006 07:57:00 PM
Cliff said…
Actually, I think Jean-Luc is boycotting her. You know, I've boycotted Proctor and Gamble before, and I've boycotted Hell thanks to DeGarmo and Key, but I've never boycotted a person. I wonder what that would be like?
1/10/2006 10:08:00 PM
Jean-Luc Picard said…
What's that, Cliff? You think I'm boycotting her? I think not!
1/11/2006 01:39:00 PM
Ciera said…
Jean-Luc - I think Cliff meant not replying to Daydreamer's comment that you'd dropped your words, not me. And it comes from the fact that I just asked Cliff if he was boycotting my blog because he hasn't been here in ages.

Fluke - Ha! Show me where it says that poems have to rhyme all the time! :P And I have no idea what syncopate means.

Cliff - you're something else
1/11/2006 02:03:00 PM
Jean-Luc Picard said…
Oops! Sorry for the mix-up.
1/11/2006 03:23:00 PM
Ciera said…
No need to apologize, Jean-Luc...it was a very telling comment! :)
1/11/2006 06:41:00 PM
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